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Joe and Carl were on a long bike ride through the desert As they were riding Joe saw a dam Joe wanted to go take a closer look but Carl wouldnt move Just as they walked to the edge of the dam something fell on the other side of the gully When it hit the water a redish black color filled the water they figured that it mush have gotten hurt Joe when closer and then a big storm began The rain started to break the dam and Joe and Carl ran to the side of the gully Joe couldnt make it up the side and just as carl reached the top he looked down and the dam broke Joe was crushed and killed by a huge wave of red water Two months later they found his fleshless body Carl awoke in a terrible sweat For the past to months Carl has been having dreams of how his friend Joe died After Carl could focus the phone rang It was Cessy and she wanted to know if Carl would be on her team for the up coming scavenger hunt Carl liked her so he said yes without thinking On the way to the kitchen he noticed a message on the answering machine Traci had called earlier and wanted him to be on her team but Carl was already on a team so he never called her back The next day at school Traci was so worried about Carl being on Cessys team but she couldnt get him to change his mind They all got together and went down to the school Each group got a map and started the hunt They all want over town looking for clues The hunt was kinda based on the gold rush Cessys second clue was to go to a mine in the desert When they arrived they came to the conclusion that the mine was haunted but
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