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It was a hot August afternoon in the year of 2011 and I was jumping up and down waiting for my dad to come home from picking my aunt and uncle from the airport This is the first time they are coming to my house and my family and I planned a big surprise We are taking them to Wisconsin Dells to Grizzly Jack Water Resort for the weekend As Lily aunty and Baby uncle was just starting to settle in the guest room we told them to pack their bags grab their swimsuits and get in the car for the three- hour drive to Wisconsin So my dad mom Isabella my little sister Lily aunty Baby uncle and I stuffed our bags in the car and got on the road When my family and I got to the resort my dad was trying to find a place to park I then saw a bus full of African- American kids who are probably on a field trip Lily aunty commented Looks like the pool will be crowdedDad answered But they cant ruin the blast we are going to haveWhen we checked into the two rooms my dad has reserved for my family and was getting relaxed in the room my sister started yelling hysterically WHEN ARE WE GOING TO THE POOLMy mom replied in a little annoying manner Isabella Lily aunty and Baby uncle has to get settled in their room and they are probably tired from the car tripBUT I WANNA GO TO THE POOL NOW My little sister cried angrily Just then Lily aunty knocked on our door I opened the door and Lily aunty asked me Baby uncle and I want to know if you are almost ready to go to the pool My sister who got her swim suit when my mother went the bathroom came to the door and shouted happily IM READY TO GO TO
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