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There once was a man by the name of Michael He was a supportive husband and a great father until he started drinking I had some good times and some bad when my father was still alive It was December 15th 1979 when my wonderful father took me to see Santa Clause at the mall We had such a wonderful time We took pictures together and he bought me this doll that had red pigtails and she had the prettiest dress on He told me that this is what I look like when I get all dressed up My father would take me to see the Easter Bunny when he came to town He even took me to McDonalds to see Ronald McDonald I was so happy when I was a kid My father told me that I was Daddys little girl and never forget that he loves me My father treated me like I was a princess He bought me a beautiful white pony with blue eyes and light blonde hair I named her Mystic and he taught me how to ride her and how to take good care of her I would wake up everyday at 7 am just to take care of Mystic I had so much fun When I was about 4 years old my father bought me a beautiful brown and white English springer spaniel puppy and I named her Dookie Dookie would sleep with me every night and she would wake me up in the morning so she can play Dookie was my best friend We would go feed Mystic together and I would chase Dookie around the yard while I was riding Mystic My father would sit outside and watch me for hours telling me to go slow and be careful About 2 years after my father bought me Dookie I noticed my fathers change in behavior and attitude He would sit outside with his beer and smokes
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