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To Whom it May Concern Candidates Name Trey Fetterhoff Date May 24 2000 I am the father of the above candidate and will try to give you the profile that you request Trey has lived with me for the past four years and has grown to be a very mature individual At the end of next month he will be 19 years old He is very personable and many adults who have met him have remarked to his mother and I how polite he is He has a very wide circle of friends who sometimes I feel detract from his concentration on schoolwork Each year in high school he has played football in spite of being virtually the smallest in height as well as the lightest in weight I was concerned for his safety because many of the players he came up against were 50 to 100 pounds heavier He loves the sport is a talented broken field runner and a fearless tackler For the past three years Trey has been on the wrestling team He wrestles at the 112 pound weight class He has done well at the sport and has either been third fourth or fifth in Western MA at his weight Academically Treys performance has been sporadic I would generalize by saying that he does well in communication dependent subjects -- english law Spanish and drama He did not do well in biology chemistry or history Sometimes his performance is directly proportional to the rapport he has with his teacher Its too bad that some students like Trey cant motivate themselves in spite of a teachers personality or instructional style One of the reasons why Trey wants to go to a private school for one year prior to college is to help discipline himself as well as improve his college-of-choice opportunities In my opinion I feel he realizes that he has been living in
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