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What did you do to accomplish your achievement What challenges did youface Limit 1000 characters or approximately 150 wordsAfter being notified that I was of the top 10 of my original traditionalhigh school class which consisted of 475 students transferring to an all-honors academic high school was quite the challenge All the whiledealing with grief from my first experience in loosing an immediate familymember everything from my academics to my social life began to fall apartGraciously accepted into an all-honor academic high school was my turningpoint in realizing I was classmates with the best in all of the Charlottearea My honor from my previous school was quickly belittled when I wasplaced at the bottom of my class I strove to bring my GPA back to arespectable level Once I struggled to maintain a 30 in all honors andcollege level classes I thought a 40 was impossible I faced the challengeof deciding what was most important along with balancing each of mystrenuous course loads along with extracurricular activities Facingconsistent deadlines and restless nights of studying after work orvolunteer events dedication and determination awarded me a 40 in myhardest semester of high school and a 100 on the required graduationresearch project This is a little bit too long It cant go past 1000 character and Im struggling with shortening it What impact did your achievement have on you your family your schoolor your community Limit 1000 characters or approximately 150 words I have no idea how to go on to explain how this impacted my community after talking about my transition
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