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A Realistic Look at Filipino National Hero Jose Rizal

This essay discusses the Filipino national hero Jose Rizal. The student points out that Rizal was a human with flaws but still fits the definition of a hero.
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Bob's feedback:

"Taking a closer look at a national hero and showing their more human side is not an easy task. You've expressed a balanced view of Rizal. Make sure to give a brief introduction of your subject and his accomplishments to provide adequate context for your reader.

There are a number of errors that can make the essay difficult to read. If this is due to language barrier issues, consider working with a native English speaker to identify problem areas.

Much of this essay speaks in abstract terms about human qualities and morality. Giving specific examples of Rizal's actions or traits will help to illustrate your claims and lend more credibility to your arguments. Make sure you have clear transitions between ideas as well."

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