scroll to top
Stuck on your essay?
Get ideas from this essay and see how your work stacks up
Word Count: 587
The sun was at the peak of noon with temperatures rising over 25 degrees Celsius It was Daniels 3rd day at Brisbane Grammar School He sat on the bench in front of the Ladies Toilets waiting for someone with sympathy to sit next to him He had never had a friend before and always had desired for the contentment of a friendship since he started school However he had always been portrayed as too fat too stupid or too lazy so as a result it was natural he was friendless He looked at the building which there were windows bricks and doors and wished he could just be as blithe as those objects Instead of being so uncomfortable in his tight uniform he hoped he could just lie down and go to a wake less sleep He listened to the contiguous noises and heard only the constant cycling of the air conditioning fan the lawn mower on the oval behind him and the occasional murmurs of fellow colleagues who completely neglected him whenever he attempted to start a conversation Although he had already been accustomed to the verity in primary school that no one would try to allow him to be his or her friend he had anticipation that since every single person in the year group was new to the school they would be more than willing to make friends with him However on the last day of his first week he was inexorably proved wrong During lunchtime Daniel heard the annoying siren that meant only one thing A fire Remembering the instructions for a fire drill which he had memorized he started to walk down to the oval Then he saw it It was the biggest fire he had ever seen And it was burning between BGS and BGGS Not only that but it was burning exactly over his sisters classroom He could hear yelling and screaming as if there had been a
@Kibin is a lifesaver for my essay right now!!
- Sandra Slivka, student @ UC Berkeley
Wow, this is the best essay help I've ever received!
- Camvu Pham, student @ U of M
If I'd known about @Kibin in college, I would have gotten much more sleep
- Jen Soust, alumni @ UCLA