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I remember now most vividly the smells Diesel fuel and electric fires give off sort of an acid oily stink No more stench really I guess to be accurate It is a pervading stench that envelopes and surrounds me Overwhelms me I was completely cut off an island in a sea of black choking enveloping mist The APC armored personal carrier was this smoking silhouette It looked menacing like the Chinese war-machine it was until my eyes focused on the gaping hole in the side When this hole was considered the vehicle looked sad almost like now dead it was resigned to its fate a rusting old heap a coffin of men out here in this long-ago and long since no-mans land The hole was what did it That and the fact that I was the one responsible the one who had pulled the trigger thus relegating this fate to the APC and also responsible for the cloud of smoke that now encompassed the all to brief battle site I was the gunner The jeep beside the APC was a ruined twisted wreck It was riddled from all sorts of small arms fire ranging from the Maggots 60 to the SAW squad automatic weapon and door-kickers M-16A2s The metal frame even took a couple of grenades too It was in a pitiful sight More so were the bodies of the three men who just moments before had been soldiers trying to mount some kind of defense for their lives They were not so much bodies any more because bodies conjure a mental image of the human shape Maybe the body is cold and pale and has a bluish tint to it--wooden when dead No these were better described as corpses The damage the Jeep took from the small arms was nothing compared to the devastation that was brought onto these corpses They were literally ripped apart red dripping moist smoking charred sad little sacks of
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