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Who am I During all of high school I seemed as if I were hiding behind a mask When I was at home I was a totally different person At school I was trying to be a person who could fit in but the more I tried the more it didnt seem to work Everywhere I went I would censor what I said depending on my surroundings and the people that were with me Most of the time I would not say anything at all because I was afraid of being embarrassed I would always have to change my mode when different people were around me It was horrible I hated it I was getting sick and tired of always being someone I was not It was about the middle of the summer of 1999 after my junior year that I realized that being two different people was the worst thing that I could that done to myself and that I did have other options Around that time a major influence on my life was my cousin Ben He taught me that I would only live once and that I should be the person that I was and not some one that just tries to fit in We were sitting a in a coffee shop one evening when he asked me the one question than changed my life Who are you When I first heard this question I hesitated to answer This question opened a new door in my mind that had never been opened before This was the first question that had actually made me think about myself and who I was The more I thought about his question the more I realized that I had a decision to make to be the person who tried to fit in and cared what other people thought or to be myself For the past 16 years I had tried to fit in and I had
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