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My most recent motivational moment was this summer of 2013 Somehow in life I have always been given so many opportunities and chances but I never took advantage of it For the past few years I have been aimlessly doing something to make someone else happy As my mother and friends expect certain performance from me They set a certain guideline for me to follow I never understood why and never question about it I just follow it as if its my job to do so As years goes by I started to feel tired and exhausted from all the pressure Then one day I finally had the courage to travel to South Korea and Singapore with my best friend I felt relieved that I could get away from everything I felt proud and thought this could really help me find what I want to do with my life Only for me and not for someone else I was right but the process wasnt as smoothly as I thought it would beGoing away for vacation felt like a dream but dreams dont last over night This vacation showed how I wasnt ready for the real world as I believed I was It showed how I wasnt ready to be alone facing the adult world when I was lost in a country I barely understood the language I needed someone who can lead the way I realized I needed someone to care for me and I hated that I hated how I felt helpless and wanted to cry every time a stranger wont help a foreigner like me I felt lonely and lost that I would stay in my room and skype my friends from Canada instead of exploring a foreign country I was completely helpless and lost I thought I was independent because everyone said so We were both wrongOne day when I was alone and afraid to go out and explore Seoul I watched
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