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A Reflection on The Scarlet Letter by by Nathaniel Hawthorne

In this reflective piece, the student reflects on The Scarlet Letter by breaking down the events in the novel and discussing which characters they sympathize with and relate to.
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Crystal's feedback:

"You pack in a lot of details about The Scarlet Letter and end with a good reflective element about what you're excited about in terms of finishing the novel. However, because there's not a clear introduction to frame your essay (or a conclusion to wrap things up), your purpose isn't clear, and there are very few reflection details in the content. The content is very heavily focused on summary; instead of summarizing the details, consider adding your reflections on those aspects of the book. Breaking up the content into paragraphs would also improve readability considerably. There are also a very high number of grammar and punctuation issues that make some areas difficult to see where sentences begin/end and to understand your intended meaning, as well as some instances with typos and erogenous capitalization (e.g., "integrant by pearl") that are hurting clarity as well. Cleaning up those areas or having them pointed out to you and corrected via a solid edit would help improve the readability and clarity considerably."

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