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A Reflective Essay on How to Achieve Three Educational Goals

This is a short reflective essay about a middle school student's educational goals for the school year. The student highlights three goals related to English skills, explains why the improvements are needed, and identifies specific steps to take.
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Crystal's feedback:

"You've done a really great job with the overall essay structure (clear intro, body paragraphs, conclusion) and with transitioning between both sentences and paragraphs. However, there's a little of unequal development in the third body paragraph; the paragraph would be stronger if you also explain what action you will specifically take to achieve the goal. With sentence structures, the general flow would also be improved if you used more sentence structure variety; you currently use a lot of compound sentences. Finally, there are a significant number of run-on sentences due to missing commas in compound sentences, and some phrasing is a little bit awkward due to wrong or missing words. Addressing the sentence structure issues and smoothing the flow/clarity in the phrasing would strengthen your essay to build on the good essay structure you've crafted."

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