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My name is Jonathan and I was born in Taiwan I came to Hawaii when I was about two years old so I can pretty much say that I lived here all my life Chinese was actually my first language but since Ive been living here for so long it seems like English is my first language especially since I do speak it a lot better than I do Chinese I guess you can say that I am a sophomore in college now that we just got our grades back from the spring semester I have a total of thirty-two credits now and hoping to have forty-four after this summer Almost all my life my thing to do was soccer I was obsessed with soccer and that is all I ever wanted to do I learned how to play when I was in Kindergarten and was only four years old I just got hooked and played in a league when I was in third grade I just kept playing and it kept getting more and more fun I would say that I couldve been a lot better but there was a time when my parents got divorced and I think it really changed my game I had to stop playing in 5th grade for about a year or more And if you didnt already know it just a week of not playing really kills a persons game So you can imagine what it did to me after I started again after a whole year But I just kept with it because of my love for the sport and I really started seeing improvements again I played in high school for Kaiser High and I would say that those were the best experiences of my life Sure my parents never really came to my games but again the love of the sport just keeps me going The experiences of traveling a way to play different teams
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