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A Research Paper on Anabolic Steroids

This essay is about anabolic steroids, the history of their use, and both positive and negative side effects. First, the author mentions how anabolic steroid use was brought to the forefront of the drug scene when the Soviet team used steroids to sweep the podium at the World Weightlifting Championship. Next, the author highlights positive and negative side effects of anabolic steroids by talking about muscle growth, muscle definition, strength, increased sex drive, training efficiency, improved recovery rate, shrinking testicles, mania, depression, liver disease, kidney disease, cancer, and addiction.
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Jenn's feedback:

"This paper is off to an excellent start, and, with just some minor changes, it will be even better. First, the topic of your essay is clear from the very beginning and continues to be evident throughout the body of the paper. You accomplished this by writing an introduction that includes a thesis statement and important factual information throughout the piece. To improve the paper's opening, I suggest that you make your thesis statement a bit more concise, mentioning that you are going to discuss both the positive and negative aspects of steroid use. Regarding formatting, you do have inconsistent spacing and scattered throughout the text. The spacing issues also appear in your bibliography, along with the need for your bibliography to be alphabetized. Last, there are many grammar, punctuation, and word use errors throughout the document. Please do a read-through of your paper or have someone else look at it to correct these mistakes."

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