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A Restaurant Review Essay about The Knife in Doral, Florida

In this restaurant review, a student describes an Argentinean restaurant called The Knife. The writer focuses on the restaurants service, food, and atmosphere, and ultimately recommends the restaurant.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Erin's feedback:

"This restaurant review made me hungry! You did a nice job of highlighting what you appreciate about the restaurant -- including the food and the atmosphere -- and you mostly organized your essay well. Watch out for sentences like "I have always wanted to try Hispanic food just to compare..." though -- that doesn't quite fit with the rest of the paragraph, where you focus on the atmosphere of the restaurant. I think the biggest thing you can do to improve your essay is to add spaces between paragraphs, as the text is a bit cramped in those transitions, and proofread. There are several punctuation, grammar, and sentence structure issues that should be resolved. For example, The Knife should be capitalized throughout, since it's the name of the restaurant, but you don't need to put quotation marks around restaurant names."

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