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The door slams behind her leaving her in complete darkness This is not happening Not to me I cant believe this Not even a tiny beam of light Why there are no windows in this basement Is it too hard to place one tiny little window in some basement in case of these kinds of situations Pause Situations like what How on earth would anyone have thought that someone would try to go down here knowing the door is broken and the lights are out Well now they have an excellent example Oh my God this is not happening Not really It just cant be happening Breathes heavily All right just calm down Just dont look down there because there is absolutely nothing to see Oh my God of course there isnt Because you simply cant see You wouldnt see anything even if there was a whole camp of refugees living down there Pause Thats a nice thought Well you have to agree it is much better than some Adams Family-creatures for adults R-rated Good Just keep on doing that to yourself and it will help the situation Stop whining and do something Its not that hard Just turn around Its a simple motion And the door is right there behind you What if it opens Youll never know if you wont try Which would be really pathetic She slowly streches out her hand in the back Then turns half way and stops Its right there dont start to panic Breathe Just like they do in labor Oh how would you know She streches her arm again now reaching for the door Slowly fumbling she finally finds the door handle and turns it It hadly turns and the door stays locked Well with what did you think it would open With magic She suddenly bursts into tears slides down and
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