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Jesus Lives in Colorado Teenage angst never tasted so good Everytime that bottle of Jack Daniels touched his mouth he got a little more numb and his thoughts of her drifted further away At 19 Dave didnt really consider himself a teenager anymore But tonight he was using every excuse he could Bottle in one hand handgun in the other he tried so hard to sort out his thoughts and make up his mind But even just sitting on that couch he couldnt even see straight He set the bottle down on the coffee table and took a nice long drag of his cigarette He picked up her picture again and for one minute his head was clear Except for her Her long soft auburn hair flowing behind her he hazel eyes and her beautiful smile were what he loved most about that picture She looked so happy there What went wrong He sighed and put the picture down and leaned back into the overstuffed back of the soft leather couch At least it will be easy to clean up he thought It was one year ago tonight but he could remember every detail as if it were last night He closed his eyes and breathed in deep She had ended her life in the same fashion that she had lived it quietly Gathering a clean bath towel and a magazine she walked towards the bathroom Blowing a kiss to her boyfriend just as she was closing the bathroom door The water was flowing at a fast pace and felt to be just the right temperature She undressed and lowered herself into the tub It was an old claw foot tub she had chosen the house almost specifically for the old bathtub The razor that she used to shave her legs was overlooked for her boyfriends razor instead He wholeheartedly believed that the best shave could only be achieved with a
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