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When I was nine years old I wanted to go on a field trip far away from home So the school that I was attending was having a three day two night field trip to Saint Augustine and Busch Gardens The teacher was distributing the permission slips and payment plans When I went home I took the paper to my mom and dad They told me if I make As and Bs that I can go on this trip While I was already making these grades I already knew that I was going My parents were scared to let me leave the house because they feared that I may not like it I may get into trouble and I may get homesick My parents didnt want me to go but they let me go and prayed for me on this tripOn May 23 2001 my field trip was paid for in full My friends and I were so excited to go on this trip together At 400pm The same day my friends and I parents took us shopping for the trip on the 25th of May We went to the mall and bought shoes clothes underclothes hygiene products and snacks for the hotel My friends and I bought all the same outfits and shoes for the trip so we were excited that we were wearing the same thing as each other on the trip While we were coming out of the mall we were jumping skipping and hoping to the car with excitement written all over our face Our parents were excited for us but t hey didnt want us to go on this trip because we all never been away from home My mother cried because she didnt want me to go but she wanted me to enjoy my childhoodAt 645am I woke up to get ready for school I was just so energetic on this Thursday morning on May 24
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