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"The good points you make are obscured by overly complex writing, while grammar and spelling receive little attention. Play titles should be italicized. The first sentence can make its point without going on to such lengths. Note the misspelled word in this sentence, which shows why you should run a grammar checker. It is good practice to avoid informal expressions such as contractions. The first paragraph ends with another long sentence. You should remember that you serve the reader, who benefits from concise writing that is easy to comprehend. Paragraph 2 states that almost all plays are plays of action. Can you prove this? You can avoid the issue by ending the sentence at the comma. You introduce an acronym for the play’s title, which is inappropriate; furthermore, the acronym is undefined. Instead of a hyphen, you should break up a sentence with an em dash, which is made with character code on a PC or by shift-option-dash on a Macintosh. You pair a plural subject (events) with a singular verb (has). Instead of summarizing the essay, your conclusion discusses the author’s motivation to write the play."
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Kibin. (2024). A critique of long day's journey into night by eugene o'neill. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/a-critique-of-long-days-journey-into-night-by-eugene-oneill-LremiE78
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