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A Review of Roald Dahl's "The Way Up to Heaven"

This is a review of Roald Dahl's short story "The Way Up to Heaven," including an overview and brief analysis of the plot.
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MJ's feedback:

"This project is off to a good start. You have begun to collect some examples from the text to support your claims, and your enthusiastic language encourages the reader to take an interest in the story. It isn't clear whether this is supposed to be a formal academic essay or an informal book review project. Check the instructions for your project to clarify this, as you may need to include formal in-text citations for all instances of paraphrasing/quoting. Another issue is the quality and organization of your content. Aside from repeated errors with conventions such as grammar and capitalization (e.g., the word "heaven" in the title should be "Heaven"), your summary and analysis of the plot is not very clear, and it is difficult to get a sense of the story or your argument. Try re-reading the story a few times, and then revise your project, focusing on giving the reader context so that they can appreciate and understand what you are discussing. If you are still struggling to convey your meaning, consider having your essay edited for further assistance."

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