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Crabbe makes many mistakes during his stay in the outdoors that reveal how ill-prepared he is for his escape One mistake that Crabbe did before he left for his adventure was to not bring a lifejacket If he brought a lifejacket then he might not be as afraid to canoe in the water Another mistake Crabbe makes was leaving his food pack on the ground near the tent If he had put it up a tree away from his tent the bear wouldnt have bothered him Crabbe also shouldnt have shrieked or moved because then the bear wouldnt have leapt at him Crabbe should have noticed the strange animal droppings almost like cow-flops all over the place Here is a quote from Crabbe after the bear attacked him When I got to my hands and knees I realized with disgust that sometime during my ordeal my bowels had emptied a liquid stinking mess into my pants and down both legs I had pissed myself too The disgusting stench of myself nauseated me further and I began to retch again as I crawled toward the lake Crabbes lack of preparation for his journey into the wilderness is made clear by his lack of skill in performing necessary tasks and lack of knowledge about outdoor life If Crabbe were prepared he would have remembered to bring a map and a compass set on his journey with him so he would know which way he was going Crabbe should have also gotten lessons on how to canoe because he doesnt know how to steer the canoe Here is a quote from Crabbe just before he goes over the falls As I was suspended for a split second in mid-air you know what I thought I thought Christ Crabbe Ill bet you look ridiculous Can you believe it For that microsecond before a very likely death I felt embarrassed Crabbe doesnt know how to find or cook
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