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I am lying down in bed staring at the butterfly stickers on my ceiling I think about everything I have to do this early Monday morning I getup and get ready to do my chores First I clean up my room then thekitchen and finally the living room I got hungry afterwards so I wentto go check the refrigerator There wasnt much there because my dadand I hadnt gone to the super market yet We usually go Monday nightAlex theres nothing to eat Too bad for you cause I have money Buy me Subway No Please and I will do your chores Finelet me just finish playing call of duty I need to kill this fool Okay then While I am waiting I sit down and do my adult schoolhomework packet Okay Im done playing are you ready to go Yea Were goingto take my bike Why We can just walk it Yea but Im too lazyugh fine We step outside and I get on the pegs of my brothersbicycle Lets go downhill No Dont be stupid Alex Ha-haIm going to go fast hold on I hold on to his sweater and yell at himto stopJust as were approaching Washington and Normandie I see a black HondaCivic heading our way My brother tries to stop but before we knew itthe car hit us I felt the pavement scrape my skin Only my legs wereunder the car My brother was a few feet away from the car He wasknocked unconscious I get up in a panic not paying attention to thepain all over my body I run to my brother and help him up Alex getup please I feel a tear running down my cheek I drag him near thesidewalk I look over at the driver of the vehicle Hes an African Americanteenager with two Latino passengers in the backseat
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