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I walked home from school carrying a load of books on my aching shoulders Each step I took was accompanied with a wish that I was already at home resting on my cozy bed As I dragged my foot along I could see small pieces of dried tar rolling on the rough surface Upon reaching my doorstep I heaved a heavy sigh of relieve and pleasure At last I last reached my long waited destination home My red sticky palm reached out for doorknob I was about to set foot onto the warm shaggy carpet then I heard a soft whimper coming from behind me When I turned to look for the source of the sound I felt something fury brush past my ankle Looking down at the fury thing I was rooted to the ground Right there looking back at me was a black puppy Before I could even think of what to do next the puppy ran into the kitchen I heard my mother roaring in agony I was given a five minute lecture Although I explained that the puppy went into the house when I came home my mother stubbornly came with the conclusion that I purposely let it in After the lecturing I was order to throw the puppy out of the house Reluctantly I brought it to the park near my house I had brought along a can of canned beef I gave the beef to the puppy and watched it devour it I stroked the soft smooth fury animal and said my goodbye leaving the puppy behind
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