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He act like he cant stand me no more Say Im evil an always up to no good He tries to take my baby but I dont want to let him go No I whisper but he acts like he doesnt hear me I dont let him go because I know Pa will want to kill him just like he killed my little girl I try and sit up but Pa doesnt want to let me so I yell at him No you aint taking Adam He stops and looks at me with disgust in his eyes You already have a name for that child he spits at me but I dont reply I know that I called him Adam from Adam and Eve God would like that it means the beginning and my Adam is the beginning of me being happy I know I have made him mad but I cant help it He pulls back his arm and hits me right in the mouth my lip starts to sting and my eyes get all blurry so I look away because I dont want Pa to see me cry even though he has seen me cry many times before it feels different this time because if youre a mama you have to be strong Pa tell me that he going to kill me and my baby when Im sleeping but I dont care what he says because I dream of me running away and having a family in nice warm house So when Pa leaves I get up and take my boy into Netties room Oh Odessa Nettie says in a distressed voice what have you done to your lip I didnt realise but when Pa hit me my lip started to bleed and it had run down the front of my old smock I tell Nettie that Im sick of living here and that Im going to run away to the church
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