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Disclaimer The following is an exaggerated fairytale depicting actual events in my life It holds very little validity The rain stopped clouds cleared and the sun came out The atmosphere was alive with a sense of all around goodness There were two young men standing in an open field taking advantage of the beautiful weather during a predominantly rainy season Both men were very attractive They were tall and fit the perfect formula for gaining the affection of several of the towns beauties They were best friends and had been for ten years now The older of the two was named Michael He had dark hair and was in amazing physical condition The other was named Drew Drew was very tall and lean and had blonde hair Although they looked nothing alike many people pictured them as brothers They were both very sensitive men with calm relaxed personalities They seemed to agree on everything and have everything in common so it was no wonder why they were thought to be related The town they stood in was their birth place The town was called Wantagh It was a fairly small town filled with many privately owned establishments Wantagh had a reputation for having the most beautiful and elegant women in all the land One would think this to be a perfect setting for two handsome young men like Drew and Michael but it was not the case For they were longing for love but the women of Wantagh did not please their appetites for a loving relationship There was so much beauty but no personality Then there was that one day that would ultimately change Drews life forever That day was today the day Alaina moved to Wantagh How fitting for the perfect girl to arrive on the perfect day As Drew and Michael stood in the field Alaina approached them Alaina was an Asian girl of average height with long dark hair
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