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I was walking to the bedroom of my hotel suite when I caught a glance of myself in the mirror I saw myself how others must see me My eyes looked small and deep set My eyebrows thick but short my stubble was growing back it looked as if I hadnt shaved for days I continued walking to the bedroom and was totally unprepared for what I was about to see on the television screen I was totally shocked How could the person I killed just six hours ago have been found already I was flabbergasted I had left him in a secluded reservoir on the outskirts of town He shouldnt have been found yet it should have taken at least another two days What had I done wrong I must have slipped up somewhere but I always take so much care when doing these things I was petrified I was staring at the television set in disbelief my eyes pierced like daggers sweat dripping from my brow by the litre It was boiling hot but I was feeling cold Shivers went up my spine every few seconds it was like mini electric shocks When I tried standing I just collapsed back on to the sofa in a heap Now I had to take action I had been planning that murder every precise detail for three months non stop and still it didnt go to plan and I have no idea where it went wrong I have to get a flight as quickly as possible The police are on my trail and I have to escape before they have time to catch up with me I had to book my flight and hope for the best If I could get a flight by tomorrow I could be in New York by Wednesday I would have to think of an excuse for being back early but that was a small problem compared to everything else I
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