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I remember a time where everything around me was grand and everything that I came across was new and exciting The newly polished floorboards at my grans house was an ice rink to me a perfect place on which to practice my sock skating Her large two poster bed would be my own trampoline which I contended to bounce up and down trying to reach that elusive ceiling light that had so much dust on it The banister that followed the stairs down to the kitchen would have been the perfect pole-slide that it been more vertical but that didnt stop me Down I would go hugging the railing until I felt at little wooden block bump into my backside which told me that it was the end of the banister and the end of my ride Then enthusiastically I would run up the stairs and slide and slide down again until was dizzy from the running and the sliding and the running Then of course my mother would intersect me before I trying to slide again She would call into her presence and look at me with her disappointed eyes What am I to do with you Pause and sign How many times I have told you not to slide down the banister Youve gotten your clothes all dirty and theyre new clothes as well And dont think that I havent noticed the foot prints on grans bed Ive told you once Ive told you a hundred times grans bed is not a trampoline Youll ruin the springs in the bed and then gran will have to buy another bed You dont want that do you mother lectured with a strained patience showing in her voice But of course I didnt notice that at the time I was too absorbed in how much fun I was having and knowing that my cousins would come over soon and play with me So I would meekly
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