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This Girls A TripThe girl slowly creeped across the floor She had a look on her face of love Shebegan to tempt me I could not allow her to take control over me I could not resist I hadto let the love warm my body I have let her take over once again I have lost to her kiss The kiss that has sweetened my blood I absorbed her bodyI walked down the trail on a journey to find my house I took this route every day I know that it will lead me back to the place that I love so much The place that I learn tomake something of myself This wonderful place that I call home gives me power I amfinally a free man I can survive well and I control my everyday thing I love living alone Iam in control I set the rules I am the man of house I rule my own countryShe tickles me with her long nails She scratches the back of my neck oh so gently I get high off of this girls love so often I met her at a symphony She is very popular allthe puppies of my society adore her She has seen parts of the world that no one else has She has been kicked out of this country many times The dreams I have after I sleep withthis woman are so incredible that it makes me a little crazy the next dayWhy do my parents keep bothering me I can hold my own now I am mature Iam a man I do get distracted real easily and my parents keep ruining my distraction I amupset because of that I have my own apartment in Santa Cruz I live in a pardise California has it all beautiful beaches pretty girls great bars money palm trees and tonsof smog Can t live without itThis girl really is a trip All the things people
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