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It all started when I was about 12 years old I was going to a day camp at the church down the street and in my group there were a lot of girls and one of them was named Jane She was about my age a little bit shorter than me and she didnt like me very much Our youth group leader took pictures of each of us to give to our parents We were making custom frames by using painted puzzle pieces And I had red ones and she was given green She wanted my red ones and I wanted my red ones so she told me y b I want the puzzle pieces I dont like green and I said to her no I cant use the green because the background of my picture is green And as we were gluing the pieces to the cardboard frame she kept on kicking and pinching me And I told my youth leader that she was doing it and told her she wouldnt stop doing it She just said Jane stop antagonizing people As we were outside after group we were eating our stale cookies and drinking our not-enough-sugar and too-much-water kool-aid she went inside and told the leader she was going to use the bathroom she actually went in took apart the frame and wrote all over my picture fat-ass bitch and then she went back outside told me what she did and then threw her kool-aid on me And then she pushed me and said whoops didnt mean to and then ain a real fighting voice she said Fat a and then I pushed her back and we started to have our little rumble in front of the church And then our youth leaders broke us up and told my parents I dont know what they told hers but they told my parents that we started fighting over spilled kool-aid And when I tried
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