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Megan Kaufmann As the arctic cold rain drops sprinkled diagonally with my loose flowing auburn hair I splashed across the street to the bus stop Although it was showery and very damp I was happy about my upcoming day the clouds were fluffy and dark grey and there was a wonderful scent in the air which perfumed of the spring morning Just as I strode across the street the mustard tinted bus filled with immature junior high students pulled up beside me I wasnt thrilled to be riding the bus but it was either step onto the yellow nightmare filled vehicle or walk in the rain so I quickly chose the bus I selected a seat in the center of the bus next to a small built looking girl in a purple sweater plastic rimmed glasses and navy jeans The youngster had brunette short hair and tiny diamond studded earrings shinning in her ears She smiled at me looking at me in a way a puppy dog would I could tell she wanted me to talk with her but I had no intentions in making friends with a childish schoolgirl who probably could have been about age thirteen Hi I am Dominique she said in a hyperactive way I am so happy that you sat with me what is your name I pretended to care not wanting to be rude to the young girl I responded I am Megan and truthfully I only sat with you because all of the other seats were filled I did however find it interesting that this bizarre looking child was so frenzied in this time of the morning My favorite animal is the dog do you like dogs she asked in a begging way I have three dogs They are all German shepherds those are my favorite kind of dogs As she spoke I could smell her breathe it smelling of uncleanness and was filled with the stench of
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