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A Study of Oxytocin's Effect on Trust and Risk

In this lab report, the student details a study they conducted in regard to oxytocin's effect on actions requiring trust or risk.
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Natalie's feedback:

"What an interesting experiment! You stayed focused on the purpose of the report, had well-organized sections, and made practically no grammatical errors. In terms of content, I would suggest being very clear about what exactly the experiments entail. In the first experiment, participants have the option to “invest” their credits with a stranger. How, exactly? Did they physically hand credits to another person? Or was it done digitally? The same questions apply to the dice roll in the second experiment, did they roll a physical dice or do it digitally through a program? What exact options were given to the participants in each experiment? It may seem pedantic, but extreme clarity in this regard is very important in studies, as it not only provides a clear picture of the experiments but also presents avenues for further research (do the results differ in an in-person versus totally digital setting?, etc). There were also some minor formatting errors, so be sure to reference an APA 7 style guide. There are several great resources online. Overall, you presented your results well, but be sure to be as clear as possible about your research methods."

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