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Earlier today John and I were taking a walk in the outskirts of the town when we saw an old house on top of a hill I wanted to take a closer look at it but John looked a little spooked and mumbled something about not wanting to go there I convinced him that there was nothing to be afraid of its just an old house which havent been occupied for a while though I wasnt sure whether someone really was living there We walked up the driveway up to the house It was huge The place looked deserted the grass wasnt mowed for ages and everything was a mess John chew nails like crazy but I still wanted to check this place out The door was made of wood and looked like it could fall apart any minute I tried to turn the door knob but it fell off as soon as I touched it The knob rolled down the steps and kept on rolling down the driveway and stopped by the fence That didnt make John feel any better at all He looked like he had seen a ghost I took a deep breath and pushed the door It wouldnt budge an inch Help me out I said but John kept chewing his nails God knows why there was nothing to be scared of Or was it I took a step backwards and then kicked the door It slowly slid open and I went inside Wow What a huge mansion weve got here John took a peek into the house but didnt dare go inside There was a huge hall in the middle of the house with staircases to my left and right I went right ahead towards a glass door in front of me It wasnt locked so I carefully turned the knob and the door opened Suddenly I felt someone touch my shoulder I turned around immediately to
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