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Since I could remember baseball along with softball were the sports my family really enjoyed After I learned how to walk my dad made sure grasping a glove as well as catching a ball would become second nature Growing up with two older brothers that were just naturally skilled and great at baseball motivated me to be just as good as them Numerous assume that since you begin a sport when you turn five you automatically are going to be excellent when you get older With eight years of competence my hard work to get to the point I was at changed with a simple line drive to 2nd base To attain a spot in the softball team in middle school was a big accomplishment we were not the best team however we were not the worst decent many would say One day during practice the coach divided us up into two separate teams While one team was batting the other would be catching the balls It was our turn to catch the balls after we had batted and I went where I normally did 2nd base The best player on the team was up to bat First pitch is thrown and it was hit to the outfield I turned around to get the ball from the girl who caught it and as I did this the second pitch was being thrown All I remember was a big smack and a lot of pain on the right side of my face I blacked out and the next thing I knew is I was at the hospital for having a broken nose Surgery and a lot of medicine was the aftereffect of this There goes my last year in middle school playing softball Freshman year in high school softball tryouts were before 2nd semester I tried
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