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On a summer day of 2011 my family and I were on a vacation to Cabos San Lucas Mexico We planned to do activities that we have always wanted to do After days of begging my parents my brother and I convinced our parents to ride ATVs When we got to the station for renting ATVs my dad was eager about riding an ATV with my brother and me Since my mom did not want to stay alone she agreed to join us In the station there were a big group of people with us in the line who were also tourist and were waiting to ride ATVs In the begging the instructor started teaching us how to change gears and how to break slowly and how to break in case of emergency We practiced for a while and then we started off to a road that was in the mountains The road was very narrow on one side was a very steep hill upward and on the other it was a steep downhill with many cactuses We drove for about fifteen minutes very slowly because everyone was afraid that there might fall downhill The tourists started to complain about how the ride is not very fun and they were too scared to enjoy it Therefore the instructor decided to lead us to a flat land which was the coast of the beachWhen we got to the shore the view was beautiful the ocean was dark blue and the weather was really nice Everyone got excited and they started to drive really fast including my brother dad and me My mom however kept telling us to slow down and to be careful Then my brother started to go around in big circles and he was really enjoying it When I tried to turn to join him I suddenly flew off my ATV It felt as if time stopped like I was in my own
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