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Time to go said Timothys mom Timothy was an adoptednine-year old kid His adoptive mother raised himsince he wasthree years oldTo start the day Timothy and his mom drove to a clubhouse toeat with their neighbors James and Kim Clubhouse Lu Lu inMississippi has the best food near their house Afterbreakfast Timothy spent time and became friendswith Kims sonJamesIn a short timeTimothy and James began to hangout every dayOne day while exploring the boys located an averaged sizedpond many miles into the woods There was a small looked to bevacant house with a three section wooden pier attached to thehouse The pier was accompanied by a few boatsAt first thought the boys were too frightened to enter thehouse In silence both of the boys quickly turned around andfollowed their path marking every turn with a stick so theycould find the pond again Both of the boys just sat inTimothys house sharing their opinions on the abandonedhouse James over and over again kept repeating that itwasnt anything important He thought it was nothing but anold shack from awhile backBoys dinner time mom yelled After dinner James went homestill thinking about that houseThe next morning both of the boys had the thought to go examinethe inside of the house by peering in the windows The boysfollowed there stick-marked path eventually hearing the slightripple of water hitting the rotted pier With that sound theyknew they found itWhen the boys approached the house they tip-toed to the nearestwindow and peaked in and noticed it was abandoned no one wasliving here Suddenly the boys began to sprint towards thefront door Timothy slowly twisted the bronze handle and hearda creak from the hinges The noise instantly gave the boys thechills and scared them The door opened with a little help fromthe breeze James walked in firstTheres no plumbing electric or cable in this place Jamesexclaimed After walking throughout the house they decided thatthey wanted to make this their official place to
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