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It was my favorite place in the entire world My family and I couldnt wait to arrive The journey to my grandmothers house seemed like it lasted an eternity even though my mom and dads rambunctious arguing made my sister and I chuckle the entire way As we were driving along the wide-open highway going more than sixty miles per hour there were very few cars I guess thats something one would expect considering the fact that my grandmother lived practically in the middle of nowhere With the country music turned up as loud as it could go my family and I couldnt help but sing-along Even though I had something to occupy my time my anxious heart was beating rapidly because I hadnt seen my grandmother in years After more than two hours of singing and dancing in my seat like Hannah Montana we pulled over at a rest area While my father prepared snacks for a quick picnic outside my mother sister and I went to the rest room to freshen up Girls hurry up this place is filthy there is trash and dirt everywhere and the smell of feces is making me nauseated My mother complained Yes mom well be out in a second My sister and I responded simultaneously As we came out of the restroom the scent of salami fresh cut cucumbers and sweet juicy watermelon filled the air The bright yellow sun and the chirping birds that filled the blue sky resembled my idea of a perfect day I thought as everyone sat and ate quietly After we had finished eating it was time to get back on the road Within the first five minutes my dad had fallen asleep The vibration from his loud snoring echoed throughout the car He sounded like a bumble bee Buzz buzzzzzzzz was all I could hear My sister and I instantly broke out into laughter because my dad almost chocked on his
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