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On a very hot afternoon in August in an Arabic city I was walking alone toward my home I was exhausted after a very busy day of working in a hospital as an assistant to an ornery doctor I was thinking of requesting to work in another department when a young man and woman hurried beside me He was hardly breathing and she was very pale holding an infant in her arms They both seemed terrified of something or somebody By a wave of his hand he stopped a taxi he held her left hand while the crying baby was in her right hand They were trying to reach the taxi as fast as they could All of a sudden the young man stopped and ordered her to stay where she was until he got his marriage doccument With a lot of fear sadness and anger she did She sat on the ground of the side walk and faced a wall of a house She started feeding her baby probably to make him sleep Curiosity made me watch them and I stopped near the woman as if I was waiting for somebody From her appearance you knew that she didnt live in luxury She was pretty but hollow-eyed as if she hadnt slept or eaten for a long time While I was lost in revirie another young man who covered half of his face came toward her He stopped behind her in a threatening manner She immediately stood up and peered at him with fear and pleading She hugged her baby firmly so he didnt get hurt The man with all his strength stabbed her with a knife and ran a way She screamed loudly and so did I She twitched and fell down A few people hurried toward us Her husband came running but too late I was terrified and shocked Everything happened so quickly I gave the husband the baby and promised myself
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