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We were friends at least I thought Theres only one guy thats why we fought For three years in silence of him I dreamed Iwas happy you had no feelings for him it seemed You went to his housewithout telling me It hurt deep inside somewhere you cant see Im not you mother my permission you dont need Its not like you couldnt theres not a friendship creed But we both agreed to just leave him alone But you didnt now my trust is gone You couldnt even tell me about it yourself I had to hear the story from someone else Just look me in the eyes and dont tell a lie I found out the truth and I almost cried You may not know how much I actually know And Im not going to tell you so- You wont feel guilty and have sympathy I wanted to lock it deep inside and keep the pain with me Then something happened something I cant believe I told you I didnt like him and you believed me You should have seen through it you should have known it was a lie I cant remember what I was doing but I know that I did cry When I found out you were going to make him choose i couldnt believe it I wouldve never done that to you You knew I liked him too much to say a single word You said you couldnt handle it at least thats what I heard He knew i liked him too much to ignore him everyday He wasnt sure about you so he said what he had to say Two friendships just ended because unlike me You have to make things difficult you should have left them be After three years I will now move on Because you made him choose now my friend is gone I was wrong for lying We were wrong for fighting You were wrong
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