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Despite what anyone will tell you it takes more than just a desire to play the game and more than just a want to be the best You need athletic ability skill and a hate in your heart for losing to succeed in this game The game Im talking about is BASKETBALL Since I was eleven I had that desire to play the game and to be the best I first stared playing when I was eleven years old I would watch my mother and aunts watch basketball on TV They would get all excited watching the players all the different moves the players made and the shots they sank in the rim The more I watched it with them the more I could see the appeal it had on them then and on me now I was mesmerized by all the spectacular gravity defying moves the players seem to execute with the greatest of ease From that point on I have ever since somehow known that it was my destiny to succeed in the game of basketball and I didnt then and dont care what anybody has to say to the contrary Its in my life until I die That is just a small example of how much I LOVE BASKETBALL When I first started playing I was small couldnt shoot I couldnt even dribble the ball But I wouldnt let lack of experience stop me The fact that I had never played before didnt stop me from learning and trying to be the best player possible ever in the game which by the way is my goal I played and practiced whenever I could but no matter how hard I practiced or how much I practiced I was never good enough to beat the other kids in my school You see
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