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Air Force Leadership Philosophy Statement

This is a personal philosophy statement written by someone in the Air Force. They focus on their leadership philosophy and style. They detail how, as a commander of a squadron, their management style would be centered around communication, integrity, empowerment, and empathy. The author also expressed their concerns about favoritism and being too laid back.
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Jenn's feedback:

"Overall, this is a very well-written philosophy statement with only a few minor changes needed to provide some improvements. First, the purpose of your statement is apparent because you have written both a solid introduction and conclusion. It is also evident that you maintained focus on that purpose throughout your paper and that your paper is very well-organized because of the introduction and conclusion. There are a few minor formatting errors that need to be resolved for the sake of making the piece look neater. They primarily have to do with reducing the spacing between paragraphs and fixing some broken lines. Last, some issues need to be resolved with grammar and punctuation to have the statement sound more scholarly and read with more cohesion."

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