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Michelle has been diagnosed with Anorexia Her mother began crying and leaned on the side of the wall The doctor began to reach out feeling the pain she felt because it was only four painful years ago his own daughter Alexia was diagnosed with the same condition The doctors daughter Alexia had been in her high school years when she began to feel as if her filling 125 lb weight was a little large See the problem was that Alexia was never considered fat just considered healthy at least thats what her doctor said Well Alexia decided that she would begin to lose 10 lbs and hope that the results would improve her status as one of the pretty girls Alexia had never had to lose weight before so she did what seemed right she ate at the bare minimums Maybe a carrot a small sandwich and water was enough for her Of course her body at first rejected this minimal intake and produced more fat cells to keep the balance However our bodies can only compensate for so long before it begins eating its own fat So with that in mind Alexia began achieving her goal at a fast pace too It was not long before Alexia got back on that scale to find out she did it She lost her goal weight and felt better than ever before Even boys at school took notice to her changes and grew more attracted to her Yes life was going just fine for her but somewhere in the back of the young girls mind there was a striving A striving to be thinner I mean the way she thought if she lost 10 lbs then imagine what kind of attention 15 lbs would do A tempting logic Because we live in a society where we value ourselves by how we look and not by the content of our character Alexia believed that this was the right
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