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It was in June I was on a School Geography Field Trip to ThailandI was separated from my teachers and classmates while we were visiting a rice farm in the ouskirts of Bangkok Soon I found myself alone in a strange foreign land I walked for days and days until my legs could carry me no further Then i stopped by the riverbank to get some water to quench my thirst When i was drinking I noticed that the jungle was eerily silent My eyes were scanning all around the jungle looking out for predators As i was doing this my vision was fixed on a shiny sparkling object about ten to twenty metres away I was petrified of what I had seen Was that a beast out there I did not know what to do next I tired to keep myself calm and I moved towards the object slowly The object was nowhere in sight as I approached it The canopy above me was getting very thick and I could hardly make out what was lying ahead of me because of the darkness around me I used my bare hands to feel my way and I got out of the dense vegetation eventually The view ahead was breath-taking I was standing at the edge of a tiny lake fed by a tall majestic waterfall Perhaps even a bitintimidating Nevertheless the power that laid beyond the waters was simply too tempting for one to just admire it from a distance and not go forward to explore the mysteries inside the cave My curiosity got the better of me Without any hesitation I went round the lake and soon I was just standing in front of the waterfall The splash of cool refreshing water droplets on my face was most amzing I had never experienced that I ducked under the waterfall and I saw something so strikingly enchanting that I was sure no one had ever
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