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Amending the Bill of Rights to Address Current Societal Issues

This is an expository essay in which the author presents an argument as to why the Bill of Rights should be rewritten. The author goes into detail about which amendments they would choose to combine and why. The author suggests that the Bill of Rights needs to be amended to address current issues.
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"You did a very good job writing an introduction that includes a clear thesis statement that guides your paper. You also did a great job using the conclusion to summarize all of the primary points made in the body of the essay. The content is written clearly, concisely, and logically allowing the reader to be able to easily read the paper and understand what you are trying to communicate. Also, there is a lack of citations in your document. Since you have included so many facts, you should have citations that represent where the facts came from. This is important to avoid plagiarism issues. Last, there are number of grammar and sentence structure errors that need to be resolved through a round of proofreading."

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