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Last Chance Snow fluttered to the ground as Jane pulled her gold jersey closer to guard against the blistering chill Although the miniature goblins and ghouls had just collected their annual treats winter was already wrapping its bitterly cold hands around her The soccer field shone glistening from the already melting snowflakes Even though championship game had not yet started the Warrior stadium overflowed with rows of eager fans enthusiastic to be watching such an important soccer match The line of girls marched up to the slushy field to meet their adversaries the Panthers shivering in their gold soccer shorts Jane could see the opposing team glance warily at them as if the game was just a waste of their time In every heart burned the desire to win to achieve a task never before accomplished The Lady Warriors were on a mission to beat the Panthers for the first time in school history The first forty-five minutes of the game went uneventfully both teams attempted to score but the soccer ball was shuttled around the field like a ping-pong ball aimlessly with no sense of direction As they battled against their opponents the harsh and brutal wind attacked the athletes They had to win They had to beat the cold They had to beat the best team and they had to get even Whistle blaring halftime was declared and the team trudged back through the icy grass disappointed The winter chill was barely felt as their unspoken frustration took over The team circled together and listened to their coachs encouragements The shrill whistle sounded once again and the team charged back onto the field feeling the motivation to win remembering Coach Smiths last words Theres nothing you girls cant do Jane was inspired and she rushed on the field playing like a maniac Suddenly an ear-splitting crack was heard and for a second there was silence Perhaps her excitement blinded all other senses but
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