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A Chance to Save The air of a cool summer night brushed my hair as my friend Greg and I made our way through the night Hes tall and skinny but has a fearless mannerism about him I on the other hand am a little over weight and strong but always nervous about getting in trouble We were both going to be sophomores in September and could not wait The stars that night shone bright and they gave us the light we needed as we made out way off my back porch Greg and I had been planning this night for a while now and we had it all figured out There was only one factor to worry about though What if we were caught Thinking about getting caught we made up excuses if it happened We headed towards the grave yard with a feeling of untouchableness I felt as though some of Gregs mannerisms wore off on me We walked down my street until we came to the rise of a hill which was the approach to an abandoned private drive that lead to the grave yard I had been down this path before during the day but at night it was much different We approached the gate which stopped cars from using the road as a cut through It was old and easy to get by All we did was crawl between two of the bars Grrrr GRRR Ruff Ruff Bark Run Greg Run I yelled at Greg with a nervous tone in my voice He took off sprinting and didnt stop until he realized that I was not with him As I caught up to him I couldnt stop laughing All the Grrrs Ruffs and Barks were from these three fenced dogs whose owners back yard came in contact with the road Every time I walked down that path they were always there and I couldnt help trying to make Greg
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