scroll to top
Stuck on your essay?
Get ideas from this essay and see how your work stacks up
Word Count: 545
A Day at the Park Janette wake up Lets go to the park I heard this faintly from the depths of my sleep I woke up to find my little cousin sitting by me on the bed eager to leave I had woken up a bit irritated but I figured that it was time that he and I spend some quality time I got up took care of my morning necessities we got in the car and we were on our way As we entered the front of the park I could already see the huge mass of greenery that spread itself around us We followed a few signs to reach our destination the skating part We got out of the car I found a nice place to lay my things and my cousin ran to the skating ramps as if he had 1 hour to live It was a very pleasant day the breeze seemed to playfully invite everyone to enjoy themselves The children were laughing jumping up and down all over the place The sun was high in the sky and The only protection I had from its burning rays were the poofy cloud puffs that would occasionally hug the little yellow dot we call the sun In awe at how the world was created I hold my hands up to my face and make a border around my eyes I picture myself a part of the painting at that moment I felt like a cartoon character painted on to the canvas of the world The leaves on the trees were so detailed and multicolored each leaf contributing to the trees entirety The birds chirping melodically gave the complete scene joie de vivre I felt an inner peace a feeling of connection I called out for my cousin to come eat My stomach was gurgling at the smell of bar-b-q from afar I reached into the picnic basket I was disappointed at
@Kibin is a lifesaver for my essay right now!!
- Sandra Slivka, student @ UC Berkeley
Wow, this is the best essay help I've ever received!
- Camvu Pham, student @ U of M
If I'd known about @Kibin in college, I would have gotten much more sleep
- Jen Soust, alumni @ UCLA