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An Analysis of a Perfume Commercial by Dior

This essay analyzes a perfume commercial by Dior. The student describes the imagery and what it is meant to evoke, as well as the intended audience.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bob's feedback:

"This is a strong paper, and it hits most of the requirements laid out by your instructor. You've done a good job of describing the imagery and analyzing which emotions and sensations it should evoke. Be careful not to jump to conclusions without support, however. For instance, you mention Theron appearing as "an ode to all women." While you later get into Dior's decision to portray a diverse group of women, this comment stands out as a bit of a leap without an explanation. You have a strong introduction, but it should be in its own separate paragraph rather than jumping into the description of the commercial. There are a handful of grammatical errors -- mostly punctuation -- that should be addressed."

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