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Before the soccer game had started both teams were preparing for a fierce battle As I looked around I could see the fear on my teammate faces Some looked nervous while others were laughing and joking around Seeing the size of the opposing team made me a little nervous too My coach had the most confident look on his face as the players took the field I picked up my smooth soccer ball and placed it in my bag I bent over and ran my hands threw the slimy grass to help clear my mind I grabbed as piece of pre-wrap and gently put it in my damp hair I quenched my thirst with a cold cup of water As I began to watch the game I slowly wiped the sweat off my face I could smell the concession stand that was only a few feet away from our bench The smell of the hot dogs distracted me from the game Sitting on the sideline I could smell the fear from the players as the first goal was scored against us During half time the players rejuvenated themselves with fresh smelling fruit Their attitude quickly changed as the players became more determined to be the victors The sound of the players was very serious They talked to each other on the field as if they had known everyone their whole lives As our forward dribbled past the opposing teams defense the crowd let out a huge roar Our bench was cheering so loud that I though I had became deaf As she kicked the ball into the back of the net everyone was standing and cheering There was the taste of sweet victory as we scored once again The game ended as being the winning team we were all treated with Gatorade The Gatorade was a little salty but it definitely re-hydrated us We all celebrated that night by getting ice cream Once
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