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What do you want now He spat these words at me These were the words of a 16-year-old boy who didnt give a damn if I was upset I was locked in a room full of children who were feeling the air for their own voices back Would I have to do like them would I have to grab the cold air for something that is mine and only mine and no one had the right to take from me because I came to help screaming children Why are you doing this Are you completely thick No one will ever understand me no one Yet I thought knowing what you did youd understand Explain to me and I will What did I do that he was speaking so casually about Fine Like any boy from this town my father worked in this mill Yet none of the men liked working here as they suddenly all lost their voices except my dad then one day all the men in this town seemed slowly to die out except my father Doctors believed they lost their voices because of chemicals in the atmosphere but I knew that wasnt true for my father spent more time in the mill than anyone For each day he would leave this town of pain and death behind him and retreat to his mill But people kept disturbing him accusing him of murder He swore if it didnt stop they would pay One day I woke up and called out for my father he must have already left for the mill yet as I peered out my window to see the familiar candle lit room at the top of the mill I couldnt even see the mill A thick gray fog had fixated around my fathers mill I didnt know what to do I couldnt see him and I didnt know if he was all right so I decided to go find out
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