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An Event That Changed My Life Oh my God What happened Im in so much pain Mom answer me Wheres Craig is he okay How come youre not answering me Hello Where is my boyfriend Somebody please tell me what has happened Craig is in surgery things are not looking so good for him Those words still linger through my mind whenever I drive down stable road a deadly road and a night which brought major destruction to my life It was early February and my boy friend and I were on our way home from a party I barely remember what happened everything happened so quickly My boyfriend Craig and I were at a Valentines Day dance at our friend Michaels house Everyone was drinking smoking and partying hard I was on my thirteenth drink and we hadnt been there for very long Craig got worried about me so he told me to stop drinking and that we were going to leave I wouldnt listen something inside of me told me no you have to stay here where its safe I told Craig that we couldnt leave the party that I had a gut instinct would be dangerous but he thought I was so wasted and hat I was just rambling on He said he was going to leave with out me then I couldnt let him leave alone so I left with him ON the way home I still felt weird about being out and I had no idea why Something in my head was saying pull lover now I told Craig to pull over and dont ask any questions He didnt listen He thought it was the booze in my talking and just wanted to get me home safe and in my bed I kept protesting but I was having no luck Then out of know where came
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